What if planet

In a planet far far away In the space there was a planet that was called Candy world. there were two little planets in Candy world,one world Is with lollipops and candy floss,the other one is with every single candy in the world.On candy planet the trees are candy floss and the mountains are ice-cream.

proper nouns

Capitalisation

Correct the capitalisation in each sentence as you rewrite it in colour below.

1. ben and i are going to the movies.

Ben and I are going to the movies.

2. yesterday, i went to pt. england beach.                                                                                                                                    

       Yesterday I went to Pt . England Beach

3. monday was waitangi day.

        Monday was Waitangi day

4. have you seen the movie three wise cousins?

        Have you seen the Movie Three wise cousin?

5. mr. burt is the principal of our school.

       Mr. Burt is  the  Principal of our School.

6. did you know that ms west likes to sing?

       Did you know that Ms West likes to Sing?

7. mrs. moala was born in the united states of america.

       Mrs. Moala was born in the United States of America.

8. mr. moran enjoys coaching sports.

       Mr. Moran enjoys coaching sports.

jayah swimming recount

On Wednesday room 11  went to swimming lessons down at the GI pools . Before we left to swimming lessons  we went to the toilets to get into our togs.

                After that we came back in our class and put our school clothes back in our bag and then started to walk down to the pools.When we got there we sat down on the set and talked about river safety. River safety was about slipping on rocks and . After we talked about river safety we walked down to the showers to wash our togs.

After  we went and wash our togs  we got into the pool a and introduced ourselves then we learned how to keep our float bodies and not tach the ground.Secondly we had to keep our heads in the sky when we  were on our boards.At the end we floated on our stomach for 10 seconds then we  floated on our backs for 10 seconds.And got out of the pool .

After we finished our swimming lessons  then we all got out of the pool and went and got our towels then  we  walked back to school and went in the toilets  to got get changed into our school clothes.