On friday room 11 went for a walk to Omaru creek. We left our class and put our shoes
on then got into a straight line.
When we got there we saw empty bottles, a pukeko rubbish and poop.
I felt sorry for the ducks and the eels because people would flush wipes down the toilet and they would throw their rubbish in the creek that made the water yuck .
the most important thing about Omaru creek was all the pukeko. because they are living in dirty water.
So no more putting wipes down the toilet and throwing rubbish in the creek.
Hi Jayah-May, It's me Jaedah. I think your writing was the best because of the pukeko that you were talking about. And your writing is good for a 8 year old. Here is a link to my blog. http://pesjaedahsb.blogspot.co.nz/
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