Thursday 17 August 2017
chapter 5
When he woke up he had break fist and went to check up on his grandma but she was not there so he checked in his mums room his garage and on the side of the house he looked and sore his grandma he told her his dream she said nothing like that would happen to me.So they went in side and had a shower and got changed he went and had a walk at his friends house and they played out side all-long.They went and had dinner they had mince and chess pie he sleeped at his friends house and they went to bed.
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Your story writing is amazing. Try and condense your work and get more to the point. Also go more in to detail about he dream. Xoxo love you see you after school.
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