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Wednesday, 27 February 2019

Little red with a twist




Little Red with a twist
Walt: write a narrative using correct punctuation and sentences.



Characters:  Little big Riding Hood
                        Scary man
                         Friends
                         Security


Setting:   Pools


Write two sentences about what will happen in each part of your narrative.
Beginning
Middle
End
First Little big Riding hood is going to go to the pools to drop some sandwiches and chips of to her friends. And when she is getting the sandwiches and chips out of her car she realizes there is a man watching her.
When she realizes that a man is watching her she grabs the food shuts the car and runs. When she ran the man ran after so she ran past the Reception and threw the door bye the pool. The man follows her and then she slips whens shes running towards the showers she falls in the pools  with the food.
The man jumped in the pool and tries to catch her but she was too fast. Then she has to run to the reception and then  she calls for help and then security comes.


Now you will start your writing here. Make sure to have a beginning, middle and end.


Start here:


Once upon a time Little big Riding Hood was going to the pools to drop some sandwiches and hot chips of to her friends. She went to the boot of her car  to get the food and she realized that a man was watching her, so she grabbed the food shut the boot and ran. When she started running she saw that the man was running after her. she went past the reception and threw the doors bye the pools. The man followed her from behind and tried to grab her but she ran towards the showers. While, she was running she slipped and fell in the pool. The scary man jumped into the pool and tried to catch her but she swam really fast and he couldn't catch up. She ran towards the reception and they called security she was so happy that he got court and that he didn't get her.


The End of the Little Red with a twist.  

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Jayah,
    Wow I really liked your story *Little Red Riding Hood with a twist* Because ot was great to read. Keep up the great work.

    Kind regards Santana

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